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RE: Hennerietta Isabella | A Love Story, "Alive in Grave" | The Conclusion

in #story7 years ago

Of course I will follow your new series too, @honeychum. You write well. You write in a good flow. Hence correcting would be tantamount to obstructing the flow. We all need to first explore ourselves uninhibited. Corrections in art are a restraint. 😊Proofreading is more appropriate. There is only one thing in writing that is to be externally cultivated , and that is vocabulary. A good vocabulary means better expression. All the rest is talent. 😊... You have a talent for infusing passion and creating a scene with ease. Work around your talent 😊...

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Yes I am constantly working on my vocabulary and thanks for bringing it in. I think this can be improved with more writing and reading. I hope you will keep pointing out my mistakes.:)

I agree , writing and reading improves the art of storytelling 😊... I will always give my honest input. Don't focus on mistakes right now. Spell check and grammar check corrects everything.
Focus on your writing strengths. Write freely 😊😊

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