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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 5 (My Original Novella)
Very tight chapter, @ezzy! I'm still not sure about Dolores but recent events have sure shaken up James. Their conversation was riveting. Again, you explain things and create dialogue between characters like no other. It's movie script stuff. Very engaging. I really felt his struggle as he came home, probably expecting an earful from his wife too. Lol, the tension was red hot! Words always fail me when describing your work. Again, a fantastic chapter, @ezzy. Cannot wait for more soon.
Hey, my friend!
Man, thanks again for the kind words! Yeah, we're starting to get deep into this one and the next chapter is gonna be a big turning point. Hope you stick around to find out. :)
I had to pick the dialogue carefully as realistic exchanges between characters is always of paramount importance to me so I thank you for pointing that out. James is on a slippery slope at the moment so maybe a quick lie down should help matters? Lol, see what happens next. :)
Thanks once again, @myb. Much appreciated. :)