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RE: Chased By The Fire Of Love- Chapter 5
An interesting story line that stopped too soon! The conversations were too jumbled together though, a few punctuation here and there would have made it clearer and easier to read. Cheers!
Yea, it's kinda confusing and I'm still learning how to compose the story well. Thank you so much.
Lol, seriously? Well done bruv