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RE: New Story - With new ideas and directions to hand. I'm writing this and posting it straight onto Steemit - You can not get more exclusive than that! 17
Nice story! You might want to check out some of my work :) I'd surely love to have some feedback from a great writer. Kudos!
I read 'Lucille' and you got me with the twist :)
I would suggest you type your stories out and then edit and adjust in your read-through.
Also, adding images breaks up the text, makes it more appealing to readers (plus, if you add them in the right place, it can add tension too).
Nicely done, although it seemed a little rushed at the end.
Thanks for the feedback @michelle . I am very inexperienced in writing and it helps a lot knowing my areas of improvement. I'll keep this in mind. Thank you, ma'am. I really appreciate it. :)
You're more than welcome. I hope my advice helps :)
It sure does and I can't thank you enough :) More power, ma'am!