This is an interesting story. I think I will continue reading these chapters. I also have a question. As an aspiring fiction writer can you tell me how to get followers? At first my stories were getting like $10 each because I was being helped out, apparently, by a guild called curie, but now I'm lucky to get $0.50 even though it takes me several hours to outline and come up with the story. Take this latest story for example: https://steemit.com/writing/@jeezzle/the-third-floor-the-ladder. It got $0.47 and that is likely all it's going to get. It has 17 votes but only 5 views meaning most people didn't even read it. How do you get people to read your stories? It's proving to be a rather frustrating experience. Thank you for any help you are able to give me. I. will continue to read all the chapters of this story as it seems really good.