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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 5 (My Original Novella)
Dolores, you just ... You just don't get it. Jeez... I get where Dolores was coming from, but come on. She knew it was a possibility, and she was the one who still pushed him to go through with it. I couldn't breathe the whole time I was reading this chapter. Her hovering around me James was so suffocating. What a tense, claustrophobic encounter. Guided by your masterful stroke, my bro, you certainly hit all the right notes. Way to put on a clinic once again!
This story gets better and better with every chapter. Always the trend whenever @ezzy's name is emblazoned across the credits section. Take note newbies, this is what it takes to get into the Steemit Fiction Hall of Fame :D
Hey, my brother @jedau!
Man, you're so on the money with Dolores. She seems fascinated by this ability James has been bestowed with. Almost to the point of desperately just wanting to see the end results of this cyber-experiment. Yeah, she's got her set of motives alright. And James is caught in the middle of the crossfire. Together with dealing with a company whose main objective is cashing in on as much money as possible from their clients and his disturbing nightmares, it's fair to say things could be better! :)
Massive change up of pace in the next part and one I need to tread very carefully with.
As always, man, your comments are so humbling. Just remember, we're bouncing ideas off each other here as I hold your work in such high regard, you wouldn't even believe!
(Btw, I love the "me" switch up there!) :)
Bless you so the max, my bro! :)
If there's one thing sci-fi has taught me, you can never really trust anyone! I guess horror, romance, drama and even comedy taught me that as well, but that's beside the point haha! Definitely excited to see what happens next, brother! :D
Then please don't trust me, lol! But I mean that in the best way possible. I always try to throw a curveball (as do you) to keep the reader's engaged.
Writing is so much fun... :)
Haha! That I do :D It's the most fun writers can have, I think haha!