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A story isnpired by little wanderers and adventurers. so come along.

Brave little girl
By @franciferrer.
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Holly tries to hold onto the big bear , and the flower at the same time. But she has to let go of the flower, everything slows down, she looks at the flower with sad eyes as the flower flies away in the distance. Chunks of moss, flying everywhere as it something exploded. A hard stop, she is like a liliput on its great back, an easy sway follows along as the big beast starts to move. It's easier to hold on right now, she did it. She managed to hold on. Where the bear is going?


It becomes apparent as the giant in no time makes the distance which Holly couldn’t do. it wants to take a bath, but Holly doesn't know how to swim. “What to do, what to do……..” She runs her pockets. looks ahead the bear head moves left right, it have cute ears, how she would love to feel them. Focuses further and sees the lake…..continues to run her pockets. A crayon, a little rock, something shiny, couple cherries, paperclip. A button, sea shell, a paper star…. Purple ring “oh there it is!”, and crackers. The bear is on a clearing making its way. and something drops from the sky. The bear looks around. No one's there. Holly just silently giggles. The bear sniffs the treat. And eats it, he likes it, then another one falls from the sky, further away from him, he looks at the corners. No ones there, not even the birds in the sky. He rushes to the treat , then the next one falls, a bit further. So it continues until they get to the nearest tree, the crackers are not many left. She tosses last cracker right under, a fat tree branch latches onto the branch, and waits when bear will go away……. She waits…still waiting…. but the giant beast doesn't go away, it waits for a treat. She gets the rock from her pocket and throws that, almost hits the bear in the head. What a relief she didn't hit him , still won't go away. She throws, seashell, even crayon. He tries the crayon, pink crayon it is. The bear has itch in its side, it starts to rub against the tree, the tree rattles like a little bush, then the bear runs away for a bath.
Holly is left hanging. Its quite high. And she doesn't have much strength left, she lets go, whatever happens happens. She lands on her feet, then on her bum. “ouch ouch ouch hard fall”, and rubs her bum. How Lucky there is meak soil, The bear is very far away. She dusts herself off. Looks around. It turns late. The blue sky threatens to darken very soon. She sees smoke, behind the hill. She starts her journey.

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Blue ridge cabin, dark sky, dozen patrol cars everyone set off to find Holly. Little feets making their way along the cars, to the cabin. As she draws near, Holly hears her mommy, “Damnit dear the police is useless. Why we must stay here while they search? we have to go find her, we must find our baby i feel so damn helpless here “ dad- let’s go. Cabin’s door opens. They walk out, closes the door. and Turns to see, little Holly standing there. Tries to pull of a smile.

Mommy starts to cry, can’t believe it, she runs without thinking, runs to embrace her child.Holly turns weak, as she is collapsing Mommy catches her. She holds Holly tight in her arms, asks a bunch of questions about her well being, Holly says it's cold and that she is hungry. Around them goes warm father's jacket, and a tight soft embrace all around.and calming words
“it's alright now, all is well..you’re safe now ”

In the cabin... Haley rests on the bed in the warm cabin. Her mommy feeds her delicious soup and a hot cocoa. Mommy takes her in her arms, and both makes a deep sigh. It's over. Holly drifts into sleep. All the police cars are gone
Resting at the fire, with radio on the low, mommy and daddy overwatches her daughter as the radio DJ announces about they found daughter thanks for the "swift operative work of lifesavers." So enjoy this next piece all of you out there. “George Strait - I Cross My Heart”
You will always be the miracle
That makes my life complete
And as long as there's a breath in me
I'll make yours just as sweet
<<<<<<<song>>>>>>>
And so Mommy and Daddy never let little Holly out of their sights again cos there is nothing more important than their little miracle in this world. She can always count on their protection and Love.

The end
As the Song continues on. Do you remember,......Snow….......... the thief…….the first encounter………………....the bad wouf,.................the fall away....……the butterfly………….the earthquake...…...,the redcoat……..the cute bunny………..the sights……...…the cherry tree………..the cord............….the elk…….….shushhhmur…....the silly bald eagle…………...the bear………...the Flower…………...…
the relief…………….what do you remember? ............. ..... ..... .. .. . . . . . ................................................................................................................. do you remember the brave little girl?


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