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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 19 (My Original Novella)

in #story7 years ago

WOW!!! Magnificent Ezzy, absolutely unique and amazing way to tie it all together! I am beyond impressed! I have to admit I feel a little sorry for Dolores, you did such a masterful job of her character, making me like her bit by bit, but even that works into how excellent this ending was, to make me think about that afterward, to make me care about that :)

I am so excited to be working alongside you as an author, you and @jedau, it makes me wondrously happy that we all met and understand exactly what it takes to do something like this, to make the characters so real, to create a plot like this one and especially a finale like this one! I Love it!!

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No joke, @dreemit. Your comments above almost brought a tear to my eye. I'm absolutely serious. Really... Thank you so much. I can't believe I actually finished a mini-book before even completely my main novel, lol. The quirks of life, eh? Well, I'm so happy that the end result has proved itself in the eyes of such esteemed and incredibly talented authors such as yourself.

Dolores was a flawed character in her own right, however at times put her "fight" to good use. In this instance, being a true defender of James. She concocted some conspiracy theory in her mind in the last chapter, leading her to freak-out when she assumed there was no means of escape. However, her story ended right there. James's fate was sealed and she was only spectator from that point on. I'm so glad you could empathise with her as she was never meant to be out-and-out bad per se. As I mentioned above, just personality flawed.

It's no triviality that we've managed to stay banded together after being introduced to one another all those months back. It's a testament to true friendship and I'm blessed to have this in my life. I really am. We're all flying high in Steemit and it's not without the invaluable support of each other. You are the very best of dreams, @dreemit and thank you deeply from the bottom of my heart for every word you write.

Bless forever... :)

I keep attempting to reply to this, but it is so beautiful I'm afraid to spoil it! I will absolutely treasure these words for a long, long time to come.

I've often wondered if we've lived many lifetimes before the one we currently find ourselves in. Because there are times when I meet someone and it seems as though I have known them for eons. The strength of my feelings toward them, and so quickly, is inexplicable. Or perhaps this is a virtual reality game that we're in, and wherever our true home is, we have friends who have entered the game with us, and our spirits recognize one another in here. You are most certainly one of these people for me dear @ezzy.

I really love to imagine what it will be like to meet up with friends such as you, not just inside this realm-though that will be awesome, you're in for the hug of a lifetime, haha!- but also in whatever realm we originate from :)

Powerful words, @dreemit. But they ring oh-so-true! The name of the game on our time here on Steemit should be about have tons of fun and making some great connections. We tick all those boxes already, lol!

You're analgy based on "alternate realities" is very aptly put and summed up what could be a beautiful story in itself. Thanks for everything, @dreemit! I'll always have your back here on Steemit and hopefully our paths will eventually cross one day. We'll have so much to talk about and good times to be shared!

To the future... :)

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