Unfortunately, I've read this same story before, almost word for word.
This is a writing mentorship and I don't want to deal with copying here. Please don't disrespect me or the rest of the group by using copied stories.
If you want to post copied stories and risk being labelled as a plagiarist, that's fine, but don't use the story-mentor tag when you do it please.
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Ohh...I'm so sorry ma. I'll try so it doesn't repeat itself again