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RE: Editing your own work - Deadlier Beginnings Full Edit 2

in #story-mentor7 years ago

I left this chapter for the evening. Now I have read it and have not yet found the desire to change anything. That is, I believe that this part does not need radical changes. It is possible to change some individual points. But I do not think that it is necessary. That is, this chapter is easy to read and does not cause complexity in understanding. I like it.

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