The topic about (human) intelligence is too broad to be framed by just one article. Although I must say, yours is a good attempt for introduction to the issue. I would like to read more from you about this topic. I am glad that there are more people who write good content in the #psychology !

Tips for better future performance:

1. Separate your article into different sections (e.g. Introduction, Main Issue, Conclusion etc.)

2. Provide sources in the end of your post.

3. Include references in your text, if you quote.

4. Include more pictures.

Looking forward to your next article !

Cheers !