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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago

Proposed continuation for SteemShort #3:

After a long climb up the mountain, Adanma and her mother reach a place near the summit that has a small lake. They prepare their living space (tents), take a short rest, then they cook and have their dinner.

As the sky turns dark, Adanma is asked by her mother about her plans, if her husband does return to her. Adanma is stumped, she only thought about getting her husband back and nothing else. They talk about her expectations, and the mother asks if she’s angry at her husband. After a long silence, she realizes that she does and starts crying.

She’s comforted by the mother, they talk more before turning in for the night.

Adanma couldn’t sleep, she gets out of the tent and stands at the edge of the lake looking at the sky. She prays for strength and wisdom to make the right decisions.

Early morning, Queen appears at the place with some news about the husband.

She checks the tent and finds only the mother sleeping, with a folded piece of paper beside her. Adanma decided to leave for a while and will return after a few months to decide about her marriage.

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