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     6 years ago 

    Hello!

    I will cite a few examples for you:

    then I will say it is much more easier to introduce the person to blockchain.

    This sentence should read: "then I will say it is much easier to introduce the person to the blockchain.

    Because in this blog series I will be discussing about WordPress, Steempress, and reason why you should make use of steempress as a WordPress blogger.

    This would be a better sentence: "Because in this blog series I will be discussing WordPress, Steempress, and the reasons why you should make use of steempress as a WordPress blogger."

    In other not divert your attention, a website is an interconnected page use to display information about what an organisation product or services.

    This sentence is hard to understand. I think you meant to write: "In order not to divert your attention, a website is an interconnected page used to display information about the products and services offered by an organisation."

    I hope you will find this comment useful.

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     6 years ago 

    Ok thanks for your time, i now know what you meant by difficult to read.

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