Hi, @pearlkel. There are some improvements to your article which I would recommend you to do it:

• Learn to structure your article properly. Used space between paragraph whenever necessary.
• Cite your article's references
• Stating [source: Google] as the image's source was not enough, You need to put a link which gives us some information regarding the author and license version. Please refer here if you're not familiar with what I was talking about.
• You need to write the content in a form of discussion. This WebMD style will not attract many readers.

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