100 Days of Poetry / Day 75 - Yours Forever - Vaš zauvijek / Original poetry

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

Jey there my fellow Steemians. First of all: LOVE FOREVER! Secondly...

This is what happens when you have 17 minutes to write poetry for today. My RL job is killing me and I will need to do something about it, if this continues. The problem is that my 2nd RL job ( same job, yeah funny) hasn't started yet, so i wonder what will that look like if it's making me problems already... Anyway, DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME :P

- Yours Forever -

Thank you,
My friends.
My words
Aren't enough,
Your love is
Cosmic Big.
My deeds are
Gone partially.
My wishes -
There with y'all.
Don't forget
Mr. Spacely,
He's here daily,
Still,
Behind the curtain.
I can't
Fly away.
I'm yours.
Forever.
Thank you.
My home is full.





- Vaš zauvijek -

Hvala vam,
Prijatelji moji.
Moje riječi
Dovoljne nisu,
Vaša je ljubav
Kozmički velika.
Moja su djela
Otišla djelomično.
Moje želje -
Tamo su s vama.
Nemojte zaboraviti
G. Spacelya,
On je ovdje svakodnevno,
Još je,
Iza zavjese.
Ne mogu
Odletjeti.
Vaš sam.
Zauvijek.
Hvala vam.
Moj dom je pun.



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Shout out to @d-pend for making this beautiful 100-day Poetry challenge. Thanks for your support and for your time you give. Much Cosmic Love.

Anyway, thank you all for reading and for your support! I will appreciate any feedback. Feel free to speak your mind, I'm open to all suggestions and critics, and I will take time to think about them seriously.


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Ahahahahaha. I just hate it when life interferes with the important stuff.

Nicely done my friend. Thank you.

Oh man this week was crazy. Today I'm free, but I got so many work on the internet because I couldn't do it last week. LOL

Hey @whack.science (Luka). It was a very nice short poem. Well done. I know what you mean by time. I was supposed to be asleep over an hour ago yet here I am paying respect to a fellow #steemian and friend. But I think my sharing my respect for your art is more important. I can always take a nap when I arrive home tomorrow from work. Thanks for sharing.

Hey my friend! This morning I woke up earlier. Like my mind knew we have some free time today, so he wanted to make most of it. But, these last couple of days were awful, considering time.

Thanks for stopping by. You paid your respect now, you can take a nap. I will continue your ''work'', as I'm awake and already wrote my poem for today, so it's time to pay some respect to others :) hehe Time is valuable ;)

Much love to you!

The short lines take us right into a scene of conflict in poet’s heart. As the title suggests, this could be any the idea of human being will last eternally as love, even life is sucks.

Exactly my friend! Thanks for stopping by

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