100 Days of Poetry / Day 16 - Nothing / Ništa - Original poetry / art

in #steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years ago (edited)

- Nothing -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

Misty, as it can be,
morning yawned over the mountain.
Who are we in this life? I wondered
while the bright egg yolk shined.

Why are we here,
I asked aloud.
Leave me! Just for a second.
Alone I want to be,
my energy is a nomad.

How can I exist in two places?
At the same time, I'm here.
Who are we without our minds,
bathing in the moonlight of our past?

Are we ant in the Cosmos, a killer in a courtroom or
a lover without love?
Who are we now?

- Ništa -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

Maglovito, jedino kako može i biti,
jutro je zijevnulo preko planine.
Tko smo mi u životu ovom? Pitao sam se
dok je sjajno svijetlo sjajilo iz tmine.

Zašto smo ovdje,
Pitao sam naglas.
Ostavi me samog! Samo na trenutak.
Takav želim biti,
moja energija je nomad.

Kako mogu postojati na dva mjesta?
Kada istovremeno sam ovdje.
Tko smo mi bez naših umova,
dok se kupamo na mjesečini naše prošlosti?

Jesmo li mrav u kozmosu, ubojica u sudnici ili
ljubavnik bez ljubavi?
Tko smo sada?

Original Poetry and Art
by
Mr. Spacely

Sometimes, something is nothing :D

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     7 years ago 

    Ummm , excellent my friend! Every day better one! Like it a lot! Especially CRO version ;) Vrh

    Jesmo li mrav u kozmosu, ubojica u sudnici ili
    ljubavnik bez ljubavi?
    Tko smo sada?

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks bro! Yeah, I'm trying but it seems it's harder and harder to translate... :( Anyway, I posted 16th poem in a row so I am satisfied!

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       7 years ago 

      You are a great writer, lovely poetry:)

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         7 years ago 

        Thanks dear :)

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           7 years ago 

          Hello! I find your post valuable for the art community! Thanks for the great post! ARTzone is now following you! ALWAYs follow @artzone and the artzone tag, and support our artists!

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             7 years ago 

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               7 years ago 

              Who were we yesterday, who are we now, who are we tomorrow? It's different every millisecond. Another awesome poem from you :)

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                 7 years ago 

                So many questions, so many answers, so little time :) Thanks for your supportive words!

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                   7 years ago 

                  That's the first time that I'm actually reading your poem!

                  The beginning is really catchy, with the yawning morning, I felt warm... I physically felt myself in bed under a blanket that is keeping the warmth of my body.

                  And the final questions seemed odd to me at first:
                  Are we ant in the Cosmos (so tiny and meaningless), a killer in a courtroom (so guilty) or
                  a lover without love (so desperate)? I love this strong ending that leaves us with an open-ended question...

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                     7 years ago 

                    Thank you @liverussian for stopping by :D I'm glad my poem gave you some feelings and it made you think...

                    Much love, Luka.

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