100 Days of Poetry Challenge Update [Day 1] (the goddess)

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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the goddess

The expanse of the sky great perfect

dominate with the stars of the sky

But one star that incandescent

down greeted me

There are spoken words spoken

There is peace that I feel

When the rays touch my face

My grief was ... erased.

The universe was all smiles

Ducking and worshiping presence

Fascinated I stared at his face

I feel I know him

But there is no know where

Only my heart can answer it

empress set the value

My search was over

do you know goddess

I always imagine you in every imagination

Thinking of you every time ...

That's my only ...

I can not get a goddess like you ...

You are like Queen of the Beauty Country

And me, only able to be your footsteps ...

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indonesia

          Sang dewi

Hamparan langit yang sangat sempurna

Bertahta bintang - bintang angkasa

Namun satu bintang yang berpijar,

Teruntai turun menyapa ku

Ada kata-kata yang diucapkan lisan

Ada kedamaian yang saya rasakan

Saat sinar menyentuh wajahku

Kesedihanku ... terhapus.

Alam semesta semua tersenyum

Menunduk dan menyembah kehadiranmu

Terpesona aku menatap wajahnya

Aku merasa aku mengenalnya

Tapi tidak ada yang tahu dimana

Hanya hatiku yang bisa menjawabnya

permaisuri mengatur nilainya

Pencarian saya selesai

apakah kamu seorang dewi

Saya selalu membayangkan engkau dalam setiap imajinasi

Memikirkanmu setiap saat ...

Itu satu-satunya ...

Aku tidak bisa mendapatkan dewi sepertimu ...

Engkau seperti Ratu Negara Kecantikan

Dan aku, hanya bisa menjadi langkahmu ...

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This poem tells of a beautiful woman like a goddess, who fascinated me with her tenderness.
the goddess

I am very grateful to a great writer that is @d-pend and steemitschool. for having accepted me as a participant of the 100-day challenge of poetry.

thank you for reading a poem from a beginner like me, I know my poem is still many shortcomings, so from that I try to learn better again, from the writers of great poetry.
thank you

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For me poetry should always come from the heart, your poem does just that. It is a great start, well done.

sorry I am still a novice in writing poetry.
but I'm not good in English.
i am sure you also know my english is bad.
Thank you for the advice

Beautiful poem and images @rizky05. I'm happy you included in your mother tongue and English both :-D

Please have fun on the journey!

P.S. also add one small link to the Steemit School Discord at the bottom of your poems: https://discord.gg/hyfYQ9P

thank you @ d-pend
I have added a small link / link discord in my second poem.

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