100 Days of Poetry Challenge [Day 6] (here without you)

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here without you

                 Walking again through the day
                 color black and white this life
                    Trying to find soul dreams
                   Who fell asleep in the swift
                    The side of the world that 
                keeps on turning bring myself

                   I tried again to turn to look
                      traces that I had carved
                       But I was left behind
            From the steps that pass quickly
                     Left myself in silence

          And I do not want to be here without you
                 Waiting for the elapsed time
            Takes it to the later limits I guess
                      I'll never see forever
                    without you by my side

              Days, months, years have now
                             been changed
                      but you are still hearted ..
                I know you're not mine again
                         but my love is still yours

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                    Berjalan lagi lalui hari
              warnai hitam putih hidup ini
               Mencoba mencari impi jiwa
              Yang tertidur dalam derasnya
              Sisi dunia yang terus berputar 
                        membawa diriku

        Kucoba lagi untuk berbalik menatap
                 jejak yang sempat kuukir
           Namun ternyata aku tertinggal
     Dari langkah-langkah yang berlalu cepat
    Meninggalkan diriku sendiri dalam sunyiku

          Dan aku tak ingin di sini tanpamu
              Menanti waktu yang berlalu
    Membawa ke batas nanti yang kurasa
     Takkan mungkin kutemui selamanya 
                  tanpa dirimu di sisiku

        Hari, bulan,tahun kini telah terganti
             namun dirimu masih dihati..
            ku tau kau kini bukan milikku
             tapi cintaku masih milikmu

                Yang telah ku tata rapi 
        dengan sayap-sayap cinta kita
   namun sayap-sayap itu kini tak berarti
       hingga tinggal kenangan-kenangan 
                     rindu bersamamu
            kini ku bingkai indah kenangan

I am a BEGINNER in the world of poetry.
This is my 6th poem in 100 days of poetry challenge.

am very grateful to a great writer of @d-pend and steemitschool. for having accepted me as a participant of the 100-day challenge of poetry.

Thank you for reading a poem from a beginner like me, I know my poetry is still a lot of shortcomings, so from there I try to learn better again, from great poetry writer.
thank you

Link to contest page ...https://steemit.com/steemitschool/@d-pend/announcing-the-steemit-school-poetry-100-day-challenge

Join the steemit school on discord https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

A heartfelt thank you to those at the Steemit School for hosting the challenge

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Enjoyed reading your poem, @rizky05, some strong emotional appeals and captured thoughts here.

My favorite lines were these:

I'll never see forever
without you by my side

Thank you for sharing.

I am very honored that you read my poetry.
you are the winner of the first champion in 100 days challenging poetry edition day 1.
thank you

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