POETRY | DAY 36 | Offcuts and Imperfections
Offcuts and Imperfections, poetry by @naquoya.
Day 36 of 100 for @d-pend's Poetry Challenge
Offcuts and Imperfections
The words
were not quite right
constructing a sentence
so out of place,
punctuation
left waiting
for so much more.
A puddle
of wasted perfection
left melting
on the floor
when he could have been,
should have been
so much more.
Offcuts
scraped up
from the factory floor
taped together
with a willingness
to dream
for so much more.
A new story
written on the tapestry
of strength
born from the melted pool
of an imperfection
that believed
in so much more.
Reading Notes: This poetry is new and written exclusively for the 100 Day Poetry Challenge, which is explained in more detail here and here.
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You just told me that nothing is useless in an interesting way. Good work.
Sometimes we just have to learn how to look in new ways.
Great work
Thank you.
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Interesting , it sounds like me hahahaa !
Can’t even critique this, it’s good.
Probably sounds like a lot of us :)
Such a good way on expressing a writer's perspective Scott! Very well written!
A writer in pursuit of something more :)
;) love that!
It's right in front of you but still you cannot see it. The vast universe expanding as you continue to Steemit.
Lovely use of words.
Yes, looking for that little extra, right in front the whole time, like you say :)
This poem made me think of one of my more recent pieces and how I cobbled it from nothing to be nothing. It could have been more. 😎
But did it need to be more? Sometimes the offcuts are more interesting, in their own way.
I went back to it to see if it needed more. Nope. An offcut was what it was meant to be. 😎