RE: 'Street Teacher' - 100 Day Poetry Contest Day 97
This what we should call heart-flow, @hartfloe. The piece is amazingly rhythmical. It flows free with the emotions of the lyrics.
I guess there's some of a street teacher in all teachers but only the braver ones dare to go "tame" and "educate" the street (the real thing).
It's always a pleasure to read you.
I loved this metaphor:
I have something to say!!
Please take just a moment...
And stay,
So we can play…
But neigh…
Autopilots -
En-route to destination.
I saw myself pictured here; I've found myself to be, sometimes, one of these automata.
This is going to be my final Weekly Find for the challenge (I had chosen a different one some days ago, but now that I read this, I can't let it go unnoticed).
My favorite feature is your clever use of final rhyme. It's music. Loved it. Thank you.
See you around :-)