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RE: 100 Days of Poetry Challlenge Day #81
This is a beautiful poem that tends to unravel a strife, it's like you let bygones be bygones, yet you still had your doubts, the poem shows a tendency to want to trust but it seems the ability to trust is really wavering.
I love your use of refrain everytime in your stanzas it made me feel like I could still taste the poem everytime I read, this is awesomely written.