100 days poetry challenge - Day 2

d4rkflow (64)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years ago (edited)

All the love that I gave you
Just Illusions I've ever seen
And all that I've dreamed
Just sadness I saw

My life just gone through you
And you shared my love dreams
You was my madness
What's left it's just goodbye

You lied saying you loved me
Saying you just wanted to me
While on the streets others you saw
My love you betrayed me

And now that's over
This sweet mistake
I don't love you anymore
The dream is over now

Don't look back
There is no more us
Only memories of moments
When you were part of me

Thank You for reading, I expect you enjoyed the poem. This character used is fictitious none of it relate to reality itself.

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7 years ago in #steemitschoolpoetry by d4rkflow (64)

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whack.science (71) 7 years ago

Great poem man, many feelings in it! But as you said, don't look back... We need to go forward!

Keep it up! Luka

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acousticsteveo (61) 7 years ago

I really like how you formed your stanzas. It made the poem flow well, and brought a strength to your emotion.

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