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RE: 100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY ONE

I see a lot of balance in this piece, @acousticsteveo, maybe a centering of the narrator's universe and perspective?

time passes even as we stop to wonder about what could have been in the passage of time,

So many Todays turned into tomorrows

yes, maybe in today walks yourself taking steps from the depths and righting feet on the paths that will lead you forward.

I know little about astrology, but can see enough in your words to wish you luck in your search for balance, my friend.

Thank you for the share. z_thank_you.png

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Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poetry. Living in the moment is where it's at. 😎

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