Hi @bashadow. Yes, it turned out that this was a bit of a challenge, but I have worked with this sort of writing before, and since I had already stated that I would do it, I followed through. Let's consider it a one-off. I suggest you try the free Grammarly app. That will help you. I wrote a post on that recently. I have sent you the finished edit via Steemit Chat, as I don't want to clog the comment section with all of that text. I hope this is helpful to you, and feel free to spread the word about this giveaway Good luck...