That's great! I'm glad you arrived to that realization yourself. Your work shows a lot of promise, and it's a shame if the length would turn away potential readers. I don't now about posting them one by one over the day though, wouldn't that be the same as posting it as a whole? Haha I mean, it'll still take people the same time to read the posts in the length of the day. Just a thought.

I'm a bit busy these days, but I'll try to carve up some time for Chapter 2 soon. Already voted it in any case.