Feedback on first self published novel

What if we could change the world? Legacy is a fictional memoir, written by an isolated billionaire who comes to realize that life is worth much more than just dollars and cents. When the state of emergency our planet is in is unraveled before him, he sets off to do what he can with the time and resources he has left, and enables his home town to play a new economic game - one built on a hybrid Universal Basic Income. Renewable Energy, Vertical Farming, Desalination Technology and Magnetic Levitation Transit are examined with cost and output breakdowns, to show the capability of these life supporting technologies were they to be applied today. Off-grid advocates, environmentalists, tiny home dwellers, libertarians, minimalists, members of “The Zeitgeist Movement”, universal basic income advocates, and anyone fed up with the traditional marketplace will find an interesting element within this work, which can make us all consider our current paradigm, and perhaps act to change it.

If anyone is interested in giving feedback on my first book, it would be much appreciated.

Hardcover https://www.amazon.com/dp/1522082034

eBook https://www.amazon.ca/Legacy-Started-Yesterday-Tyler-Patterson-ebook/dp/B071YJ6XLC

Thanks in advance.