Pardon the interjection, but I'd love some feedback too. When I first came here I posted a few clips from YT I liked, but now with th a better understanding of the Steemit project. As a result, I gave posted a few original story posts. I haven't written in a long long time and could use some critiquing. If you have the time I'd love to hear your feedback. I think the more we create the closer to our purpose we become.