Humbly, I am less interested in proofreading as I am in sharing awareness of a solution to the psychopaths in control on OUR planet (stolen from Us by the psychopaths in control through "trusts" - Unum Sanctum and the Cestui Que Vie "trusts" - and deceit). I will offer two links...

https://steemit.com/politics/@amaterasusolar/the-end-of-entropy-a-look-at-our-entropic-world-and-the-evidence-supporting-how-we-could-change-this

https://steemit.com/anarchy/@amaterasusolar/endia

I do hope You choose to read - the second link is a (very) short story I wrote to illustrate what I see.