I see no improvement whatsoever.

For comparison the MB&F product site, side-by-side next to the hunt’s descriptio.

Errors

1. You don’t understand that the watch is available in multiple cases, yet not all those cases are features/one model.
2. Multiple poorly translated (spun?) words
3. Non-sensical words
4. Numerous typos.
5. Pretty much word by words rewrite, thus bordering plagiarism/content spinning.

Offered a chance to improve the hunt’s description nothing was improved.

I have to delist this hunt as this level of quality is not acceptable for site visitors. And it also falls under content spinning.