You obviously like to write, so do it the way you like. Trying to write for others is a waste of time and talent. There are billions of others and what they would like covers everything from not wanting you to write another word to complaining that your one paragraph should have been a multi-volume version of War and Peace.

I try to do the best I can for the mood I'm in, in the time I have available and after that, the more I tinker with it, the worse it will probably be.

You are doing exceptionally well as-is, IMHO, so keep on!