Steemit Rap Verse (Lyrics Only)

in #steem7 years ago

What's up guys as most of you know know I am a rapper from Canada and I'm relatively new to steem however I've been blown away with how much support I've received so it's drivin me to write a small verse about steem, I will be recording this to a beat and will upload it exclusively to steem but for now here are the lyrics

Currently I'm gettin Currency
Collecting dis crypto wit a urgency
On the hunt for coins like piracy
Hoping dis ethereum investment does nothin but profit me
Bitcoin got me doing shopping sprees
Not bad for a kid wit no college degree
Dis bankroll mine no banks no hidden fees
Safe from these politically corrupt suited thieves
Who take my money lie and deceive
Wit crypto there's not much you can't achieve I'm watched investments grow by massive leaps
Love the feeling of making money as I'm fast asleep
Get cash in heaps
every time ethereum peaks

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Hi Love...
Yea its good lyrics, but musically speaking, it will need modifications to fit it to a beat.. I rap too

Not if you make the beat fit the lyrics!

I'm actually dead lol

Not bad. Would changing
"not bad for a kid wit no college degree"
to
"not bad for a kid wit no degrees"
help the flow?

Also, does "an urgency" make more sense because "gettin" in the previous bar ends with "n"?

Lastly, do you plan on uploading it to dtube? Can't wait.

I'm still tweaking it a bit but yes I do plan on uploading to dtube

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