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RE: Benefits of Sports

in #sports7 years ago

Very nice article, @gpwar! I'm glad you sent me the link so I could curate it. I have upvoted and resteemed this as my daily post promotion for people whom I have previously curated.

Here are a few suggestions for formatting or English language improvement:

a ** kata ** or a ** kumite **.

  • You need to delete the spaces between * and the letters to get the Markdown command to work correctly.

All sports are practiced as a team and at the time of competitions, there are some where you compete with the team, giving as an example the football. And others where you do not compete directly with your team, that is, they are individual, giving as an example the karate, where your team is in the stands supporting and encouraging you.

  • All sports are practiced as a team. During competitions, there are some, such as football, where you compete with the team. Others, such as karate, are individual. You do not compete directly with your team, but your team is in the stands supporting and encouraging you.

No more to say nothing, I say goodbye, I hope that the information provided is to your liking.

  • That's all I have for you today. I hope you liked the information I have provided in this article.

It might be difficult at first, but try to make your sentences shorter and simpler. Use the comma (,) less often. Instead, break the sentence into two or more sentences to eliminate the over-use of commas. As you improve you can begin to form more complex sentences using the commas correctly. It takes practice, so don't worry if you get it wrong. Your content in this article is still very understandable the way it is now.

I hope this coaching is helpful to you, and you will continue to write in English. Tell your little brother that he did a great job in the pictures!

Cheers!
@mitneb

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Thank you very much for your advice, it has been very useful.
when he goes through the chat he writes me to ask about other things
Thank you!!

You're welcome, @gpwar! DM me in chat any time!
Cheers!
@mitneb

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