Drawing and writing - Roots
The call of a soul corrupts me,
Trapped in the game of life
I allow myself to feel
Without knowing what was already involved
Now the danger squeezes me,
I suffocate
And it is that, beyond my memory, I idealize you
Like a mirage
I look at my hands becoming sand
I mix with the wind
Walk through your face, entering your roots
I do not pretend to belong
Not you by me
But, circumstances have led us
To become one.
Steps
The call of a soul corrupts me,
Trapped in the game of life
I allow myself to feel
Without knowing what was already involved
Now the danger squeezes me,
I suffocate
And it is that, beyond my memory, I idealize you
Like a mirage
I look at my hands becoming sand
I mix with the wind
Walk through your face, entering your roots
I do not pretend to belong
Not you by me
But, circumstances have led us
To become one.
Steps
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Thanks so much community!!!!
loved this one already when you posted the spanish version, @sawcraz.art :> but i love the poem very much now also! beautiful~
I´m glad that you still like it, thanks for all the support <3
wow, just wow
this is just so amazing
the feeling, the composition, the concept and the expression really great made
congrats, this is amazingly beautiful;
and i love this frase de most:
"I do not pretend to belong
Not you by me
But, circumstances have led us
To become one." it all really get you.
Thanks <3 This is an amazing comment too, Im glad you like my work :3 I like yours too.
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deep!
<3
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It was so considerated from you guys!!!! Thanks a lot for the support <3