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RE: Day On the Water: Original Short Story
This is beautiful– not perfect from a technical standpoint, but beautiful. I felt the emotions of the main character, his longing for a life that seems beyond his reach, the incredulity of being offered a chance, the absolute wordlessness of being given everything you’ve ever dreamed. It takes a writer to be able to do that, and you’ve got that gift. I look forward to seeing what else you post!
Cheers,
~ Mako
Thank you! @makowrites
The technical side is where I know I must grow! But, that simply gives a goal. I greatly appreciate your words of encouragement and your time reading about Atayo!