Nice story, I can't wait to see what Arcadeus looks like. If I may make a recommendation, maybe putting the dialogue lines in their own line, separated from the paragraph, would make it easier to read. I got lost a couple of times. Haha.

I'm glad to see more action in #sciencefiction, we're a smaller tag but our authors are very good. ^^ We are running a contest on techno-horror short stories to try and gather more interest in sci-fi, and it seems like it would be right up your alley. I invite you [to take a look.] (https://steemit.com/writing/@aguayojoshua/cryptails-an-anthology-from-the-blockchain-issue-1-technological-horror-contest)

You got me interested un checking out your articles too. Thanks for sharing!