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RE: A New Body Experience (Serial Novel Pt. 1)
I love love this story, girl!!! Its so sweet and beautiful (well, the first chapter), I believe its gonna turn out beautifully!!
With how Theo was cracking those eggs, I was sure that breakfast in bed won't work out😀, and well, it didn't but something better even happened. Seeing the sparkles in her eyes etc. It's amazing ....
This is different from most sci-fi stories I have read, probably because its "love themed"? Well, its even better without too much of the " techy" stuff...
I love love this, or I said that before?😀🤗
I'm glad you liked it! I've always been a little hesitant to write about love/ relationships/ romantic feelings, etc, so I'm glad that it hasn't come off too corny lol. That being said.. I'm not so sure it's going to turn out beautifully per se... Things are about to take a bit of a dark turn... But I guess we'll have to wait and see!
Haha! Well, this turned out beautifully, you probably should do more of this! Oh well, that dark turn, can't we dodge it somehow??🤔
I will love to see how it turns out...