OFFICIAL SUBMISSION THREAD
WEEK #6
MAKE SURE YOU READ THE RULES!
Yo yo if you are part of the Rap Challenge this week, here it is! Let get all these entries in so we can tally up the scores. This week should be an interesting week because the #1 winner will win a spot on a song with myself and the legendary Pace Won of the Outsidaz. I am looking forward to getting down and dirty and judging these rappers this week!
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@kaykunoichi/rap-challenge-week-6-kunoichi
DAYUMMM !
That was a mind fuck (pardon my language). Absolutely loved this. Lyrics are so real o weee
Hahaha..Why a mind fuck? lmao. And thanks!
I say that as the biggest compliment I can give to an artist. Mindfucks sell out arenas :)
Awww :)
:)))
my first female entry! this is epic!!!
yay!!
Sounds good doll, glad ya found the thread.
Sometimes I follow the rules
@kaykunoichi I looooove how you rap and your style omg! <3 <3
Awww Thank you!! <3
eyy barrin up! and adorable (i'm assuming) daughter!
haha yes that's my Daughter/hype girl!
nice you got it ma gotta out you on a track
Thank you!
real deal skill ,respect :)
I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.
Verse 1:
I never knew I’d be adopted away from my parents
Read “A Child Called It,” my connection’s apparent/a parent
My heart had turned a brittle-cold, so wasteful and barren
I tried pretending all the years, they were out running errands
I never knew that my Aunt would be motherly caring
With my Grandma housing, feeding me, healing the tearing
I used to sneak out a lot, it was risky and daring
I put my life on the line from the pain I was bearing
I tried to find the right escape, staring out curtain drapes
Trying to bottle hate, still wondering ‘bout my fate
Age 12, I found my faith, fought demons near face to face
Literal sense of case, and beat ‘em with saving grace
People think that I’m playing, Story flow entertainment
But I can’t deny engagement, the spiritual world’s adjacent
Knowledge so real and ancient, vessel I am in placement
Pouring out deepest statements, a gorge of love fighting hatred…so strong!
Song Lyrics Copyrighted by Verbal D
I fuck with this line for sure "People think that I’m playing, Story flow entertainment
But I can’t deny engagement, the spiritual world’s adjacent" your writing continues to improve, good job homie
Thank you for peeping the penmanship bro, much respect and gratitude.
Solid Entry as usual, lotta balls using an Eminem beat xD
Thank you man, I wasn't feeling any of the other beats, and I knew Eminem's beat required extra effort and performance. It was a solid challenge
It's tight D, hard to beat man.
I'm truly only aiming to be better than myself, I know my flaws, thank you bro, appreciate your valued feedback
I feel ya, I'm my worst critic too. Or best critic? Not sure how that should go lol
Worst and best, it goes hand in hand bro, I feel the same way about myself!
Ahh storytelling, always love such verses. Big up bro!
Thank you very much bro, gotta share my story and get it off my chest
@verbal-d Ayyeeeee you spit it yo!!!
Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate you listening, did you get a chance to peep the Queen Official track? You gotta hear it! That pertains to all queens.
My week 6 submission thanks @rondonson and the judges. Your keeping me on my toes.
you went in my dude!
so great flow , respect G :)
Hardcore shit!!! Love your flow man, pretty Jay-z like indeed.
:)
your flow smooth as silk man
Sickkk, Kinda got a slight Jay-Z feel there haha, dope man!
@alao Ayeeeee you smashed it!
Dope bars yo!!!
Here's Me. Enjoy. feedback would be appreciated. good luck yoll
Real cool vibe and fresh rhythmic style flow bro
"I'm the numba one spitta in the jungle fam!"
Nice flow. Digs.
Lyrics
Im a Houston kid probably off hallucinogens
Scumbag degenerate likely cause of all my friends
tie the noose record my end
In heaven with a fucking benz
Raping every fucking beat i guess this is a sinny sin
Nigga you making dough ?
no homie no you aint eatin
my niggas they making bread
yo oven aint even heated
to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason
or we put a bullet in ya head and give you something to believe in
they come to yo aid like magic but hopefully it aint magic
that shit would be tragic like no bodies in the casket
we killing boys adolf
pull up to your crib cause we caught you on the radar
pull up with the mask off spray you with the AR
we some fucking killers and we never take a day off
shooting like the playoffs i guess the gym done paid off
had to be the boss the cause the company made some layoffs
had to be the boss cause the company made some layoffs...feel that man
You had fun with this one I see, and this line of yours is truth, if there's no known purpose or intention, keep it moving
"to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason"
thanks bro!
You're very welcome!
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@eddiebxxxx/eddie-bxxxx-rapchallenge-week-6
-We all know sheep need a shepherd, thats natural/
-But I’m a goat that won’t tolerate the beef wit cattle/
-We were never banished from the kingdom, we ski-daddled/
Left the garden of Eden before we could even eat the apple/
-Fuck bein b-lessed, i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/
You lovin it, I need a beat like a tranny/
Needs a changed name, my rap name, same name, government/
-The man, the legend, so fuck who, what/
Where you reppin, the scared don’t question, so question/
Do you play stupid games just to win stupid prizes?/
-Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin/
Breadcrumb stale while I’m innovative and redefinin/
-I keep the peace while you keep the silence/
"Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin" heaviest bar of the challenge this week
It's a damn shame your third eye's been crystallizin
strick man
Vicious gritty approach as always bro, heavy entry
"i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/"
Thanks bro, and i always enjoy your bars of reality.
Appreciate that, you're welcome, I know we have different perspectives and beliefs, but we can definitely acknowledge the skill, the pen and other aspects of flow, delivery and presence factors of Hip Hop. Your entries are impacting
Man you never cease to amaze me. I look forward to judging your submissions every week buddy, always epic
Thanks Chief.
you're welcome buddy. just that real shit
Tight bro!
''Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin'', oehlala, I like that one, sick entry man!