2 minutes hand written poem! What's your opinion?

What would you love to change

What if we practiced communism in this world ?
And every man shared in the riches thereof
If your street had no beggars
And our schools no poor scholars

What if every man told the truth?
So every woman could relax in love
Her smiles will be like the morning rose
And her voice tingled like the mystical dove

What if men didnt die ?
Dreams would be a timeless tide
Fulfilment will be an everlasting pride
Great grand mothers will babysit the child

Oh that mothers will suffer less
That children will understand the stress
That everyone will show her love
While the winning child will repay her trust

If all terrorists could perish
And all makers of bombs, confused
If earthquakes didn't really take lives
And all our loved ones stayed alive

What in the world would you wish to change?

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