Hey Zane! First of all I would like to thank you for this awesome initiative

Thanks so much for that man :) I really appreciate that!

This is a great tool for young Steemians like me to get some exposure.

I love the thought of that. That's the vision here :) Thank you for your kindness.

I want some constructive feedback to sharpen my writing skills and make my articles more appealing.

I see. I don't usually do it, but if you ask, then sure.

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Awesome post my man! You have quite some potential here on this platform. I appreciate that you are open-minded, and looking to improve.

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With that mentality, you will do great here.

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Just right off the bat, I would say:

1 - Split your paragraphs up. They are in my opinion too long. They need to be more appealing to the eye.

2 - Add more pictures. Majority of people do not read the words. Nothing personal, just how it is. Pictures and visuals are going to allow your viewers to get the message easier. That's why @sweetsssj does so well in my opinion.

3 - Try find some new coding to make your posts neater.

4 - Title is too long. Shorter so people can understand easily.

5 - Make a nice personal logo for yourself to represent your name.