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RE: Mini writing workshop: What is the trouble with adverbs in fiction?
Hey @jayna, I really appreciate these useful tidbits for writers! Thank you so much for coming up with these workshops ((:
The examples that you provided were very effective in driving home the main message. I am also trying to cut as much adverbs as I can from my writing - sometimes, doing so forces me to be less lazy and makes my mind work to see how I can show and not tell.
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