Here is my entry to the first poetwisdom challenge. the desire to be accepted wholly by someone is certainly a mystery of the universe in my eyes, so it it what I wrote about.
Thanks for running the contest @droucil
Lonely Evenings
Hollowness echoes through a deep pit
Scores of moments championed
Yet still a consistent residue of emptiness
An abundant treasure to be discovered
Unknown land to approach
Leap of faith spirits are embraced
For greatest wealth may be uncovered
Light found in a forever shade
Slowly glissading upon thee
Approaching a full eclipse
Submerged beauty will not fade
Immured affection thou has released
Discovered love cherished forever
The evenings forward filled with peace
Our lonely evenings have finally ceased
Regards,
Mitchell J
Thanks for the image pixabay
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Lovely cryptic poem, thanks for being the first entry :)!
Thank you, following you now. First entry, sweet! I'm sure I will have plenty of competition pouring in soon :-)
where is this contest??
@uniwhisp - here is the post - https://steemit.com/poetwisdom/@droucil/poetwisdom-1-poetry-contest-20-sbd-prize-pool
Thanks!
This is really good.
Thanks!
Very well written! Upvoted and Followed!
We of @poetrytrail are always looking for quality content like yours! Hope you will hop on too and take part in our poetry and story writing events, it would be a shame if we couldn’t share this great writing with more of the community!
I like this. Loneliness is a great topic. Thanks for sharing!
Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
such a beautiful poem. so peaceful. I love the lines
wonderful.
Very beautiful interpretation of a lonely night... I love the smooth flow of your words! Resteemed ❤