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RE: SPU Poetry contest #2: Addict

This was an interesting take on heartbreak/addiction. I wouldn't say heartbreak is an uncommon drug, unfortunately.

I did love this part the most:

Although I know it's not healthy to keep things bottled up inside
That's the only way to keep the one I love happy and not drown her in my sorrows tide

I recommend not overloading with pictures as it can distract the flow of reading, other than that, good job :)

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