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RE: To forget sadness (Poetry)

in #poetsunited • 6 years ago

Hey @nationall!

I liked the poem, but it's kinda crunched together in just 1 block of text. If you could separate that a bit, I believe it would be much more attractive!

PS001AAA: Please take this as wise advice, not as an insult!
PS001AAB: If you're interested in writing more poetry, check out my poetry contest here. It got some neat prizes too!

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     6 years ago 

    Thank you my friend for the advice

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