an aquarian's lucid dream.

in #poetryslam8 years ago (edited)

I have a reoccuring dream .
it comes to me on its own..
Theres quite few , more than four
two i can controll

It is just a figment .

I could think about my dreams all day.

Untill i Tear a mental ligiment trying to understand the configurement
of what my minds moving pictures sent.

Is this divine intervention ?

we live one life
and have dreams as an extention.

whoever created us placed us here
to re-invent our essence

in a sense.

But i can't justify that just in a sentence .

I only have this gift.

with blessings getting showered down
by the unknown mysteries
That have the dream of our exsistance.

High above the nimbus.

we all dream .

So if your minds got something trapped inside.
We are a network of prophets

No need to be a greedy seedling
We have the same size pockets...

Get that negativity out of your meridian .

my dream that i digress from

within....

I was floating above the earth .
Surroundings black .

like the element obsidien

in rock form.

But then i realised i wasnt flying

I was a GIANT

Larger than our home planet .

I was in awe with this new form .

I Reached down with curiosity
and moved the atlantic

with a light blow ....

As i pondered whilst the waves responded.
Golden Koi carp... Glistening reflective

A gargantuan school amongst the earths ocean's manifested.

and as they surfaced with face to show.

the dream blurs*

the earth now resembles a life baron
mossy pond ,
with dying ripples upon the water

Left behind..
With no trace to show..

+Thankyou for reading +

( currently figuring out more to add as my dream repeats more and changes most times then reoccurs , so i like to figure out any meaning behind the dreams THANK YOU FOR READING AND HOPE YOU ENJOYED )

Thankyou for reading .

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This is quite an interesting poem. It has a sense of free flow to it, whilst still progressing with a sense of style and grace. Just like our dreams, I guess. I enjoyed it.

Hey thankyou so much for your feedback .

I did free flow bits im so glad you can see this in my form .

You have some great content . Followed !

Thanks for the follow. Always happy to follow back. I'll keep an eye out for your new content.

Thankyou , much apreciated as im new to steemit , ill allso look out for more , talk soon have a nice day / night dependant on time zone !

Welcome to Steemit, good to have you here. Don't hesitate to ask any questions. Steemit.chat is a great resource for that.

Thanks , ill give that a try soon .

I did enjoy this piece, I'm a fan of free form prose. I was a little confused by the tagging, since the slam challenge this week is limericks but good piece.

I really am new to this site so im unfamiliar with the relevant tags , saw it and jumped on the bandwagon lol
thankyou for your comment i did not know what style i was writing and im eager to learn more every time i write .

Thankyou for your input

Here is my translation of your dream:
I think that as the giant you realise that you are the master of your own destiny. There are plenty of fish in the sea. Big beautiful ones, so go out and search-because currently your world feels barren.

Thankyou for your input , i have the same interpritation of the dream as my work life is turbulent at the moment as i search better carrer choises

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