Poetry Dice Challenge: 3000 Week #2 | Entry #1 - The Moon Behind the Clouds
It feels as if you'd break apart
A shadow always looms over you
You're trapped with nowhere to run to
A grand tomb inside, you steadfastly hide
But I see through the fake smile in place
It looks alien upon your lovely face
Give me a chance to let your heart swim away
From the shadows that put you in a haze
Let my passion set your heart ablaze
Even on your darkest nights I'll stay
I'll be the home that will shelter you
And I will always love you through and through
Your heart feels trapped inside a grand tomb. The fake smile in place looks alien. Please give me a chance. Let my heart light your way. On your darkest night, I'll shelter you. And I will always love you through and through.
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This is my first entry for week #2 of @robyneggs' Poetry Dice contest. If you liked this, please considering giving me an upvote/resteem and tell me what you think? Thanks for reading :)
This one really speaks to me...speechless. It's absolutely perfect. <3
Thank you :) Sorry I haven't been able to catch you online in a while. I hope you're doing well <3
Excellent entry - thanks for participating!!! XO
Thank you for the opportunity :)
Wow absolutely beautiful. So powerful. I too have felt these feelings... sometimes trapped when the sadness seeps in. So well written. Thank you.
Sage
Thank you :) I certainly have a lot to learn from you on how to weave words beautifully though. But I'm glad you found value in it. Here's to us escaping sadness :)
Cheers!
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