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RE: Balancing the Mind in the Hands of Community: Poetry Dice Entry Wk24: Balance
Very moving poem. I like that your protagonist acknowledge the dark side of life and is able to pull themselves up from the depths in order to grow. Very inspiring!
Thank you for taking time to read and reflect on this poem. It means so much to get responses to the parts of ourselves we share. I feel that the light and the dark must be integrated for a smile to really mean anything. If the tears do not wash out the ducts of authenticity then the smile never shines light! Thank you for connecting!