Steemit Poetry Contest #8 + Winners of #7!
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My Greetings To You!
The theme for Steemit Poetry Contest #8 - Illusions
About Prizes:
Attention! Due to the fact that SteemDollar is really high! Since Steemit Poetry Contest #8 I reduced prizes but, as a result, I increased the number of prize places. That, in the beginning, was First Place with 15SD ~ 15USD, now 7SD ~ 70 USD. Of course get first place and 150 USD (15SD) very nice :) But good... no... EXCELLENT poems more and more and it's hard for me to leave them authors without encouragement. So I decided that it would be more correct! Now there are seven prizes! And even the seventh place with the prize of 1 SBD, it's more than last place with 5 SBD (in USD) on start... In any case, feel free to write your opinion about it!
First Place - 7 SBD
Second Place - 6 SBD
Third Place - 5 SBD
Fourth Place - 4 SBD
Fifth Place - 3 SBD
Sixth Place - 2 SBD
Seventh Place - 1 SBD
Entries will be accepted within five days from the date of publication of an announcement!
Deadline - December 17 12:30 AM UTC
The winners of the Steemit Poetry Contest #7
1st Place - "Home" by @moeknows I really felt it! It's so simple, without special "cunning" metaphors... but the expression, feelings! Bravo!
I wrote a verse so terse
It disbursed my soul
I sneer, jeer and curse
Wherever I go
I growl when I talk
And I carry a scowl
Attack ears like a hawk
With words so foul
I'm in a terrible mood
Crude down to the bone
Counting the days
till I return home
2nd Place - "Over the Ridge" by @csbegu The opposite case - a lot of metaphors! I'm just sure that my mediocre knowledge of English will not let me fully realize all the beauty of this poem... I re-read it many times - goosebumps every time! Very beautiful!
Over the ridge there are lions,
Over the ridge there are warriors of old,
Over the ridge there are waterfalls crying,
And the mountains of water are flowing with gold.
Over the ridge there are cowherds,
Over the ridge there are maidens in sight,
Over the ridge there are leaves never-dying,
And the forests are glowing with chants of delight.
Over the ridge there is memory,
Over the ridge there’s a mother in wait,
Over the ridge there’s no danger of treachery,
And the old man is crying for his soon joyful fate.
3rd Place - "What is home?" by @calluna "Home is comfy clothing and no need to wear a bra" - After reading this line, I smiled... girls are such girls :) Seriously, from this poem warmth breathe!
Home is a dog that loves you, waiting at the door
Home is flopping on the sofa, not doing any more
Home is the person, who accepts you are you are
Home is comfy clothing and no need to wear a bra
Home is a smile, a waiting cup of tea
Home is a flicking hearth, and smoking chimney
Home is a hiding place, on the very worst day
Home is a hug, the promise that you'll be ok
Home is not a place, made from bricks or stone
Home is not a thing, that you can build or own
Home is a feeling, something we can share
Home is waiting, it will always be there
Rules of The Contest!
Only one entry is allowed.
Your entry-post must be tagged both #poetry and #poetrycontest
The Title must be "SteemitPoetryContest #(with the number of the actual episode)" + the name of your poem.
You can use any types of rhyme - End rhyme, Cross rhyme, Internal etc.
The size of the poem - three quatrains (one quatrain = four lines).
Do not steal! The contest is only original works!
I wish everyone good luck and creativity!
Let's make STEEMIT more interesting and varied together!
Sincerely, Terry Craft.
My entry. #8. https://steemit.com/poetry/@khackett/steemitpoetrycontest-8-give-the-illusion
My entry for #8: https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@johnwjr7/illusions
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bcrafts/steemitpoetrycontest-8-mask-of-illusion-faefb5a6eef4f
My entry to your contest
Here's my entry https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@ajremy/steemit-poetry-contest-8-illusory-tragedy
Thank you @terrycraft for giving me a reason to write poetry, an excuse really. Blessings to you and yours.
MY ENTRY
A really good one
My entry
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@kesolink/steemitpoetrycontest-8-self-imagination-20171213t17354478z
Hi @terrycraft i hope you're doing well , here is my entry :
https://steemit.com/poetry/@educ.leb/steemitpoetrycontest-8-country-of-illusions
Country of illusions
When i stay alone some illusions comes to me,
Those pictures & feelings really scares me.
To profit from this sensation i close my eyes,
The feeling becomes big,you can't imagine the size.
At first I see myself flying to a faraway country,
right there peoples become easily rich and happy .
I knew this country .. yes i knew it !
I searched it & finaly i find it !
Without a doubt i trusted this illusion ,
My heart beats very fast thinking of a conclusion.
I open my eyes .. am i awake? is it reality?
Im afraid to know, afraid not to know ,oh Unfortunately !
I am not sure if i've chosen the correct place to post this . this is my entry for contest#8" the complaint."
I am writing this to complain,
I'm going to lose again ,
no one seems to care .
The rules are just so unfair.
Like who knows what a quatrain is,
this really takes the piss.
and why can't I copy from the someone like keats.
All these new poets he beats.
And we are supposed to make it all rhyme ,
Well maybe for some that is fine ,
I'm not gonna win . I don't see the point,
can winners be joint?
oops missed that there was a theme - or did I ?
Hi :) Yes, there is a certain theme and the poem should be a separate post, not a comment!
Thanks for that. new to steemit this week . I've some catching up to do but ill get there.i tried separate post as well #poems #poetrycontest #8.
a way i could qualify this to meet the illusion theme criteria ,the poem is written as a complaint letter .but really it is a poem . thus there is the illusion.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@gb-the-grey/steemitpoetrycontest-8-the-complaint
you are suppose to write it as a post and then enter the tags #poetrycontest and write the specific headline. then drop the post link here in the comment section.
My entry click here
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