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RE: Friday Poets's Exchange, Week 4, Contest and Community Building
Hello everyone. Here I bring you my poem from today: "Veils of the iris", I hope you like it. A hug!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@zeleiracordero/veils-of-the-iris-velos-del-iris-100-days-of-poetry-day-86
thank you for this great poetry dear. I appreciate that you took the efforts to rewrite it in English and made it come out so beautiful too
awesome stuff
"But, we are transforming ourselves into naked roses
of dreams, because we break our thorns
evading wounds."
other strange deeper connections, my last name is De La Rosa
and a line I love to use is dreams paint me with reality, I paint reality with my dreams
so a lot of this poem resonates with me =D
Thanks for the reading and the nice comment, @satorid. It's a pleasure to meet you on this path of poetry.
yes indeed nice to meet you as well
The branches become wings to look for the flight,
but as with fears,
we snuggle and petrify on the ground
Some great work with metaphor, Zeleira:)