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RE: Live life ( poetry ) by DMiLLiZ

in #poetry7 years ago

More than a song, I feel a prayer in your poetry. It's like a letter of help requesting re-education, The repetition: "I want to live life, live life", contains a cry: Live! Something in your subconscious is reclaiming space, something that tells you that wealth is in a life that is not there. There is something inside that does not allow itself to be convinced by what it is and waits for a change. It's like an old phrase that I heard elsewhere: "Because this life is not life." Greetings, dear @dmilliz. A hug! Good return to poetry. I love reading you!

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Indeed, this life i not life, it is the life they want us to settle with. I want to live life on my terms but to do that I must re program my mind from the teachings of the world that confuse and hold us back and steo into a clear vision of how I want to to live life. We must all become clear on what we want out of this life, so we can live with no regrets. Thank you:) XOXOX

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