Lluvia nocturna-Night rain - Original poem -100 days poetry challenge day 34
Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 34 , en dirección a cien días de poesía. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el ciclo de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.
"La muerte deja un dolor que nadie puede sanar, el amor deja una memoria que nadie puede borrar"
Cita
Lluvia nocturna
millares
de puntos de luz.
de otros mundos,
seres de energía azul
Sueñan
con un sueño de mar.
Lloran por un sueño de piel.
Sus alas
tienen escamas de oro
que llueven pequeños diamantes.
Se derriten
en cada parte de mí.
Me impregnan con el olor de la lluvia.
Llueven besos
de mundos eternos.
Desde los azules mares del cielo.
Las nubes
describen tu olor.
Sueñan las estrellas tus bailes, tus besos de amor.
Recuerdan
el llanto de luna, aquella
"ebria canción de amargura que murmura el mar".
El viento
trae un sonido que dibuja sombras
de pena, de días sin besos desde que te hiciste eterno.
La lluvia
llueve besos distraídos.
Llueven besos de tus labios, soplados.
Los siento como
cosquillas en mi frente,
hasta que descubro que son tuyos y te lloro.
Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 34 , heading for a hundred days of poetry. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the cycle of 100 days of Poetry, summoned by #steemitschool. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.
My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Something Inside-Jonathan Rhys Meyers
"Death leaves a sorrow that nobody can heal, love leaves a memory that nobody can erase"
Night rain
Thousands
of points of light.
from other worlds,
beings of blue energy
They dream
with a dream of the sea
They cry for a skin dream.
His wings
they have scales of gold
It rains small diamonds
They melt
in every part of me
They impregnate me with the smell of rain.
Kisses of rain
of eternal worlds.
From the blue seas of heaven.
The clouds
describe your smell
The stars dream your dances, your kisses of love.
Remember
the crying of the moon, that
"Drunk song of bitterness that murmurs the sea".
The wind
brings a sound that draws shadows
of sorrow, of days without kisses since you became eternal.
The rain
it rains absent-minded kisses
rain of kisses from your lips, blown.
I feel them like
tickling my forehead,
until i find out they are yours and I cry
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
The images are of Pixabay
Summary of my latest publications:
The broken mirror-Day1 / The habit of the monk-Day2 / This skin that I live-Day 3 / Guest I - Day 4 / Guest II - Day 5 / Guest of light - Day 6 /Eternal guest - Day 7 / Gift of flows - Day #8 / Waning moon - Day 9 / The sanchez ear - Day 10 / Numen - Day 11 / Divergent -Day 12 / Trascend-of you-Day 13 / Identit-Day 14 / The wrong theory-Day 15 / Insight - Day 16 / Cirineo / sand castles - Day 18 / sigh of your skin -Day 19 /limbo underwater -Day 20 / Dualidad fractal-Day 21 / Revelation - Day 22 / Whisper -Day 23 / Corresponding Rhetoric-Día 24 / Distant Muse -Day 25 / Renaissance - Day 26Luna escarlata-Day 27/ Criatura de luna-Criatura luna -Day 28 / Luna cautiva-Luna cautiva-Day 29 / Pozos amarillos-Yellow wells-Day 30 / Duende amatista-Amethyst goblin- day 31 / Trenza - Braid-Day 32 / Ser poeta-Be a poet-Day 33
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
The elements are indeed a blessing. Thanks for posting.
Thanks for the appreciation, dear @nicholas83.
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Admiro esta constancia. Hermosas letras.
Saludos, @zeleiracordero.
Gracias, amiga @sandracabrera. ¡Un abrazo!
Linda Lluvia Nocturna! Me encantó!
Me llamó la atención esto:
"ebria canción de amargura que murmura el mar"
Hola @leomolina. Gracias por el apoyo. Me encanta que te haya gustado.
Now I shall think like this whenever it rains. Your mind is beautiful. All the imagery you planted in my mind with your words. So at the end, you were missing someone who passed to the other side and they visited you and kissed you, and you had that tingle on your forehead. Very heartfelt.
Exact! You are very perceptive dear, @dmilliz. Read he following? It move to another space.
Remember
the crying of the moon, that
"Drunk song of bitterness that murmurs the sea".
The wind
brings a sound that draws shadows
of sorrow, of days without kisses since you became eternal.
Fabulous penning, Zeleira:)
Thank you, thank you very much, my dear Pryde. You blow my soul
:)
You keep blowing me away with your poetry. 😎
Thank you dear classmate.
Makes me wet and cold, @zeleiracordero 😊
"Wet and cold", then you drenched yourself with the nocturnal rain, appreciated @ayahkasih.